【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" should be corrected to "Impact". 2. "EPCO" may require verification for correct abbreviation or spelling in context. 3. The section headings such as "About", "Hot Products", etc. could benefit from consistent capitalization (e.g., "About" vs "Blog"). 4. The use of "Mobile Crushing & Screening" and "Crushing & Screen" should be standardized for consistency (either "&" or "and"). 5. "Menu" should not be in a separate line unless intentionally styled that way. No additional errors were found. --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "uctural" should be corrected to "Structural." 2. "Four Advantage" should be corrected to "Four Advantages." 3. "the times require" should be corrected to "the times require it" for clarity. 4. "more convenience to adopt vehicle integrated design" should be corrected to "more convenient to adopt a vehicle-integrated design." 5. "less investment costs" should be changed to "lower investment costs." 6. "the return cycle is shorter" could be improved for clarity, perhaps changed to "the return cycle is therefore shorter." 7. "be" at the end of the text is likely a typographical error. Overall, there are several grammatical and structural improvements suggested for clarity and correctness.