【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact Crusher" 应为 "Impact Crusher"（l 应为 I）。 2. "Radial Telescopic Stacker" 的"Stacker" 应为 "Stacker"（保持不变）。 3. "EPCO" 前需添加动词，如 "EPCO" 应为 "EPCO Services" 或 "EPCO Programs" 以保持一致性。 4. "Portable Cons" 不完整，应为“Portable Construction Waste Crushing Plant”或相应的完整词组。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "struction Waste Crushing Plant" 应为 "Construction Waste Crushing Plant"。 2. "The landfill disposal method that started is totally unsuitable for today's national conditions." 此句中的 "that started" 应该被删去，或改为 "that was started"。 3. "According to different crushing process" 中的 "process" 应改为 "processes"。 4. "crushing station can be combined into two-stage screening system" 中缺少 "the"，应改为 "the crushing station can be combined into a two-stage screening system"。 5. "coarse crushing and fine crushing according to actual demand, and also into three-stage screening system of coarse, medium and fine crushing" 中缺少 "the"，应改为 "the two-stage screening system of coarse crushing and fine crushing according to actual demand, and also into the three-stage screening system of coarse, medium and fine crushing"。 6. "Portable crusher plant is an efficient crushing equipment" 中的 "equipment" 应改为 "pieces of equipment" 或 "equipment sets"。 7. "the coordination of all auxiliary machinery and equipment" 中的 "auxiliary machinery and equipment" 应改为 "auxiliary machineries and equipment"。 8. "The crushing ratio of portable crusher plant is large" 中的 "is" 应改为 "is often" 以更准确地描述。 9. "Kno" 应完整写为 "Know"。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "WhatsApp" 应该保持一致，且只需一次出现。 2. "To be Our Agent" 建议使用小写字母以保持格式一致性，即 "To Be Our Agent"。 3. "Demand(multiple):" 应添加空格，改为 "Demand (multiple):"。 4. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 中的右括号应为英文半角，改为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)"。 5. "Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd." 中的年份应检查是否符合真实情况。 6. 在 "Get Solution Online Chat" 中的 "Online Chat" 与 "Get Solution" 之间缺少标点，建议加上冒号或其他标点符号。 7. "EPCO Service"以外的列表项应该保持首字母大写以保持一致性，建议为 "EPCO Service, IoT Service, Localization Service, Life-cycle Service"。