【第 1 段建议】: 1. "10 Factors Affect The Efficiency Of Vibrating Screen" - "Affect" should be "Affects" to maintain subject-verb agreement. 2. "lmpact" - should be "Impact" (the letter 'l' is incorrect). 3. "Select Language ∨" - should have a space before the language options for consistency. 4. "about" should be capitalized as "About" to maintain consistency with other headings. 5. "EPCO" - if it is an acronym, it should be spelled out in the first usage or adjusted to reflect proper capitalization depending on the context. 6. "Business" should be consistent in capitalization throughout; it appears as "Business" in one instance and "business" in another. Please confirm whether these changes are acceptable. --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "Factors Affect" 应为 "Factors Affecting" 2. "affect vibrating screen working efficiency" 应为 "affect the working efficiency of vibrating screen" 3. "the important factor affects" 应为 "the important factor affecting" 4. "reduces" 应为 "reduced" 5. "the block of screen mesh" 应为 "the blockage of the screen mesh" 6. "Type And Size Of Raw Material" 应为 "Type and Size of Raw Material" 7. "friability and viscosity" 应为 "friable and viscous" 8. "the efficiency" 应为 "its efficiency" 9. "is assured" 应为 "is ensured" 10. "stock in the screen mesh" 应为 "get stuck in the screen mesh" 11. "are layered" 应为 "is layered" 12. "particles with small density" 应为 "particles with low density" 13. "they will easily form adhesion" 应为 "it will easily form adhesion" 14. "the particles squeeze each other, ma" 这个句子不完整，可能后面缺少内容。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. “the adhesion of raw material”应为“the adhesion of raw materials” 2. “we should do some measures”应为“we should take some measures” 3. “Length And Width Of Screen Deck”应为“Length and Width of Screen Deck” (大小写不一致) 4. “Increase the width of screen deck”应为“Increasing the width of screen deck” 5. “Increase the length of screen deck, the residence time of raw material on the screen deck also increases”应为“By increasing the length of screen deck, the residence time of raw materials on the screen deck also increases” 6. “length, it is not the longer the better”应为“length, it is not always the longer the better” 7. “the shape of screen shape”应为“the shape of screen mesh” 8. “size of particles goes through circular screen mesh”应为“size of particles that go through circular screen mesh” 9. “average size of particles goes through circular screen mesh”应为“average size of particles that go through circular screen mesh” 10. “the match of width and length of screen deck”应为“the matching of width and length of screen deck” 11. “the opening area”后缺少句号。 --- 【第 4 段建议】: 1. "non-metallic screen deck, such as rubber screen deck, polyurethane woven deck, nylon screen deck etc." - "etc." should be followed by a comma: "nylon screen deck, etc." 2. "second high-frequency vibration" - should possibly be "secondary high-frequency vibration." 3. "so does the screening efficiency." - should be "so does the screening efficiency decrease." 4. "15-25бу" - "бу" seems to be a typographical error and should be clarified, perhaps as "degrees" or similar. 5. "0-8бу" - same as above regarding "бу." 6. "vibrating direction angle should be larger" - should possibly be "the vibrating direction angle should be larger" for clarity. Please confirm or clarify any terms mentioned for better accuracy. --- 【第 5 段建议】: 1. "the amplitude is chose" should be "the amplitude is chosen". 2. "we should adopt large amplitude, but when the screened raw material has small size, we should adopt small amplitude" should be "we should adopt large amplitude, but when the screened raw material has a small size, we should adopt a small amplitude". 3. "the amplitude of linear vibrating screen is between 3.5-6mm" should be "the amplitude of the linear vibrating screen is between 3.5 and 6 mm" ('and' instead of a dash and add a space before 'mm'). 4. "the jitter times" should be "the number of jitters" for clarity and correctness. 5. "we should adopt large amplitude and low vibration frequency" should be "we should adopt a large amplitude and a low vibration frequency" (add 'a' before "large amplitude" and "low vibration frequency"). 6. "we should adopt small amplitude and high vibration frequency" should be "we should adopt a small amplitude and a high vibration frequency" (add 'a' before "small amplitude" and "high vibration frequency"). 7. "7 Types of Stone Crusher and How to Choose Best?" should be "7 Types of Stone Crusher and How to Choose the Best?" (add "the" before "Best"). 8. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" should be "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" (replace the closing parenthesis with a standard one, as it appears to be a different character).