【第 1 段建议】: 发现的问题： 1. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" (字母"l"应为"I") 2. "SMP Crushing Plant" 与其他产品名称不一致，建议确认是否需要保持一致格式（例如都使用大写或小写）。 3. "Home > Case > Mine > Mongolia Scheelite Crushing and Sand Making" 应为 "Home > Case > Mines > Mongolia Scheelite Crushing and Sand Making"（"Mine" 应为复数形式 "Mines"）。 请确认是否需要更改这些内容。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "All" at the end of the "Basic Information" section appears misplaced and may need removal or clarification of its purpose. 2. "Consultation" sentence seems randomly capitalized and may need to be in lowercase unless it's a heading. 3. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" should have a space after "WhatsApp:". 4. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189" and "0086-21-58386176" might need a clearer structure, possibly rewriting for consistency in formatting. Overall, the text would benefit from minor adjustments for clarity and consistency.