【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"（大小写及字符错误）。 2. "Aggregates Belt Conveyor"应为"Aggregate Belt Conveyor"（单复数一致性）。 3. "Roofloader" 应为 "Roof loader" （单词错误）。 4. "Semi-mobile"应为"Semi-mobile"（连字符使用错误）。 5. "EPCO" 应为 "EPC"（拼写错误）。 6. "Localized Service" 的 "Localized" 应为 "Localised" 以符合英式英语（拼写变化，根据目标地区的选择）。 7. 在 "More Languages" 和 "Select Language ∨" 之间缺少分号或逗号。 请参照上述问题进行修正。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "12 Million TPY Iron Ore Crushing Plant" - should be "12 million TPY Iron Ore Crushing Plant" (capitalization of "Million"). 2. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" - should be "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616" (space after the colon). 3. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189" and "0086-21-58386176" - inconsistent format; could clarify or adjust for uniformity in structure. 4. "Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us" - should have spaces before and after the pipe symbol for consistency: "Website Map | Legal Notice | Contact Us". 5. "Get Solution Online Chat" - could be improved by adding "for" to make it "Get Solution for Online Chat". 6. "PPC参数传递" - should be translated or presented in a consistent language format if the rest of the document is in English.