【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" should be corrected to "Impact" (the letter 'l' is mistakenly used instead of 'I'). 2. "Belt Conveyor" should be changed to "Belt Conveyors" to match plural usage. 3. "Radial Telescopic Stacker" should be changed to "Radial Telescopic Stackers" to match plural usage. 4. "Ship Loader" should be changed to "Ship Loaders" to match plural usage. 5. There should be a comma after "Home > Case > Mine". 其余内容没有错误。