【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact"（字母 'l' 错误为 'I'）。 2. "SMP Crushing Plant" 可能需要确认为是否为 "SMP" 或其他形式，具体根据上下文决定。 3. "8t/h Coal Gangue Grinding Pla" 应为 "8t/h Coal Gangue Grinding Plant"（缺少 "nt"）。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "Water cooling system is installed on fan and host drive device respectively" should have "the" before "fan" and "host drive device" for clarity: "The water cooling system is installed on the fan and the host drive device respectively." 2. "So later maintenance get easy." should be corrected to "So later maintenance gets easy." 3. "vulnerable parts like grinding roller and grinding ring" should be "vulnerable parts like the grinding roller and the grinding ring." 4. In "Basic Information" and "Project Advantages," the headers are listed multiple times; if each section is meant to be unique, consider removing duplicates. 5. The date "Copyright © 2026" appears to be incorrect given the training cutoff date of October 2023; it may need to be corrected to "Copyright © 2023." 6. "Consultation" appears to lack punctuation; consider adding a colon to emphasize the list that follows: "Consultation:"