【第 2 段建议】: 1. "Input Size: < =35mm" 应为 "Input Size: ≤ 35mm"（使用正确的数学符号） 2. "R0.08=5%-10%" 应为 "R0.08 = 5% - 10%"（添加空格以提高可读性） 3. "SBM finished them with high efficiency" 中的 "them" 应为 "it"（指代单一项目） 4. "Lafarge, a famous transnational cement corporation, has cement plants everywhere." 中的 "everywhere" 用词不太确切，建议改为 "around the world" 以增强清晰度。 此外，有一处可能的偏差： - "Looking forward to next cooperation." 应为 "Looking forward to our next cooperation."（语法上更为自然）