【第 2 段建议】: 1. "person in charge" 应该用大写 "Person in Charge"。 2. "our products get popular as soon as being put on market" 应修改为 "our products become popular as soon as they are put on the market"。 3. "nearly 100 thousand yuan" 应修改为 "nearly 100,000 yuan"。 4. "window.onload = window.onresize = function (){" 这行代码中 "inn" 应为 "inner"。 以上是发现的问题。