【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" - "lmpact" 应为 "Impact"。 2. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" - 多余的空格。 3. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" - 多余的空格。 4. "EPCO" - 如果是 "EPC" 或其他已知术语，请确认。 5. "Localized Service" - "Localized" 应考虑是否需要更改为 "Local" 根据上下文。 6. "HOME", "BUSINESS", "PRODUCT", "CASES" - 需要小写以保持一致性。 请确认上下文以进一步处理任何潜在问题。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. “has been the first environmental demonstration item” 应改为“it became the first environmental demonstration item” 以保持时态一致。 2. “element of 3 million tons of fine aggregates” 应改为“element of 3 million tons of fine aggregate” 以保持单复数一致。 3. “which can realize zero emission, zero pollution and full use of the resources” 可改为“which can realize zero emissions, zero pollution, and full use of resources” 以保持一致性和流畅性。 4. “the stable operation and the quality of finished product” 应改为“the stable operation and quality of the finished product” 以保持语法正确。 5. “only five workers are needed to keep it running normally” 可以更明确为“only five workers are needed to keep it running properly” 来增强表达。 6. “excellent particle” 应改为“excellent particles” 以保持复数形式。 7. “to remove the fault ,” 中的逗号前多了一个空格，应该去掉。 8. “which is not only convenient for users to remove the fault , but also buys time” 可以改为“which is not only convenient for users to troubleshoot but also buys time” 以增强表达。 9. “Consultation” 设置不必要的空行，标识不一致。 10. “WhatsApp:+86 1” 应改为“WhatsApp: +86 1” 以确保格式一致。