【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"（字母"L"和"l"的错误） 2. "Home > News > SBM Shines at the 136th Canton Fa"应为"Home > News > SBM Shines at the 136th Canton Fair"（“Fa”拼写错误） --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "aggregates& mining" 应修改为 "aggregates & mining" 2. "20.1N01-02" 应加空格，在"SBM"和"(20.1N01-02)"之间，变为 "SBM (20.1N01-02)" 3. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" 应加空格，在"WhatsApp:"和"+86"之间，变为 "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616" 4. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 中的右括号应更改为半角，变为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" 5. “The Canton Fair is currently in full swing, we warmly welcome both new and returning customers to visit our booth at 20.1N01-02.” 这一句应该用句号替换逗号，变为 "The Canton Fair is currently in full swing. We warmly welcome both new and returning customers to visit our booth at 20.1N01-02."