【第 1 段建议】: 1. "For Aggregates Industry" 应改为 "for Aggregates Industry" (小写)。 2. "lmpact" 应改为 "Impact" (字母 'l' 应为 'I')。 3. "EPCO" 和 "IoT Digital Solution" 一行末尾要加逗号以保持格式一致。 4. 在 "Cone Crusher"、"Jaw Crusher" 和 "Gyratory Crusher" 之间的空格应进一步确认是否需要，保持一致性。 5. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" 一处多了一个空格，应改为 "High Weir Spiral Classifier"。 6. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 一处多了一个空格，应改为 "Submerged Spiral Classifier"。 7. “Home > News > SBM attended the Donghai Forum For Aggregates” 最后应加上句号。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "aggregates industry" should be capitalized consistently as "Aggregates Industry" throughout the text. 2. The phrase "government, industry associations, equipment enterprises, senior experts and scholars and other upstream and downstream industry" should be corrected to "government, industry associations, equipment enterprises, senior experts, scholars, and other upstream and downstream industries" for proper use of plural forms and inclusion of a comma before the last item in the list. 3. "EPCO Projects" should likely be "EPC projects" unless "EPCO" is a specific title or term that is intended. 4. The phrase "theme report of "The development of concrete industry from the perspective of aggregates equipment"" should use proper quotation marks and be stated as "theme report titled 'The Development of Concrete Industry from the Perspective of Aggregates Equipment'." 5. "aggregates industry" should again be capitalized as "Aggregates Industry" for consistency. 6. "multi-level, multi-dimensional and systematic solutions which are environmental and intelligent" should include a comma before "and" for proper listing of adjectives, therefore it should read "multi-level, multi-dimensional, and systematic solutions that are environmental and intelligent." 7. "aggregates industry again" should be "Aggregates Industry again" for consistency in capitalization. 8. "SBM’s customer won the awards of “2021 Production Demonstration Base of Aggregates Industry”" should be adjusted to "SBM’s customers won the award of '2021 Production Demonstration Base of Aggregates Industry.'" for correct pluralization and the singular form of award. Overall, please ensure consistent capitalization of "Aggregates Industry" and check for grammatical structures and punctuation within lists.