【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" (字母 'l' 应为 'I') 2. "中文"、"Русский"、"Español"、"العربية"、"Français"、"Português" 的标点后应加一空格。 3. “Home > N” 结束后应加上标点（建议使用“Home > N.”）。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "ews > SBM" - The first part seems to be a typographical error; it should be removed or corrected. 2. "about the science and technology enterprises" - Should be "about scientific and technological enterprises." 3. "government's recognition" - Consistent capitalization could be improved; "Government's recognition." 4. "Shanghai SRDI Enterprise before" - Should be "Shanghai SRDI Enterprise in the past." 5. "aimed at the science and technology enterprises" - Should be "aimed at scientific and technological enterprises." 6. "the government's recognition of SBM's specialization" - Consistent capitalization could be improved; "The government's recognition." 7. "after-sales service" - Should be "after-sales services" for consistency with the list context. 8. "Demand(multiple):" - Should have a space before the parentheses; it should read "Demand (multiple):" 9. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" - The closing parenthesis is incorrect; it should be a standard parenthesis: "Materials (brochures, catalogs)." 10. "To be Our Agent" - The use of capitalization is inconsistent; it could be "to be our agent" for consistency with the list's style. 11. "Service Support" - The capitalization of "Service" can be inconsistent with other entries; it could also be "service support." 12. "EPCO Service" - If "EPCO" is an acronym, its significance should be clarified. 13. "Stone Crusher In Ethiopia" - The capitalization is inconsistent; it could be "Stone Crusher in Ethiopia." 14. "Mobile Crusher For Sale South Africa" - The capitalization is inconsistent; it could be "Mobile Crusher for Sale in South Africa." 15. "Basalt Stone Crushing Machine" - The capitalization is inconsistent; it could be "Basalt Stone Crushing machine." 16. "Product Center" - The capitalization is inconsistent with other elements; it could be standardized to "product center." 17. "Consultation" - The capitalization may be inconsistent with other list items; consider a lowercase option, "consultation." Make adjustments to ensure consistency in capitalization and correct punctuation issues.