【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" （字母 "l" 应为大写 "I"）。 2. "O" 与 "C" 大小写不一致，建议保持一致性。 3. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 中的两个空格应为一个空格。 4. "Life-cycle Service" 中的连接符可考虑使用 "Lifecycle Service" 以保持一致性。 5. "SBM Welcomes New Faces 2021" 重复出现，可以去掉其中一处。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "The new employees was trained" should be "The new employees were trained." 2. "ice breaker" should be "icebreakers." 3. "completion ceremony of 2021 new employees' induction training" should have "2021" set off by commas for clarity: "completion ceremony of the 2021 new employees' induction training." 4. "Recognition for Outstanding Individual" should be "Recognition for Outstanding Individuals." 5. "Mr.Fang" should have a space: "Mr. Fang." 6. "presentation of graduation certif" seems incomplete—should be "presentation of graduation certificates." --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "everyone here get rid" → "everyone here gets rid" (subject-verb agreement) 2. "our common cause will be passed on." → "our common cause will be passed on to future generations." (clarity, optional) 3. "Demand(multiple):" → "Demand (multiple):" (space needed before parenthesis) 4. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" → "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" (inconsistent closing parenthesis style) 5. "WhatsApp:+86" → "WhatsApp: +86" (space needed after colon) 6. "Copyright © 2026" → "Copyright © 2023" (update to correct year based on initial context) 7. "Tiktok" → "TikTok" (correct capitalization) 8. "for PPC参数传递" → "for PPC 参数传递" (space needed before Chinese characters)