【第 1 段建议】: 1. "SBM two major venues has" → "SBM two major venues have" (主谓一致). 2. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" → "Vertical Shaft Impact Crusher" (拼写错误，字母'l'应为'I'). --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "nvergence"应为"Convergence"。 2. "SBM two major venues"应为"SBM's two major venues"。 3. "bauma China"应为"Bauma China"。 4. 在"Shanghai New International Expo Center ."中，句点应位于"Center"之后，不应有空格。 5. "noly"应为"only"。 6. "which noly a 10-minute drive"应为"which is only a 10-minute drive"。 7. "exhibition hall is equipped with more than 100 models of high-end equipment, become the biggest unique highlights"中的"become"应为"becoming"。 8. "SBM booth are bustling"应为"SBM booth is bustling"。 9. "circulatingthe"应为"circulating the"。 10. "not only see the solid strength of SBM, also can see the product fine manufacturing process"应为"not only see the solid strength of SBM, but also see the product fine manufacturing process"。 11. "features etiquette"中"etiquette"使用不当，可能应为"features"或"characteristics"。 12. "the next day of the bauma China 2016"应为"the next day of Bauma China 2016"。 13. "with Shanghai SBM was successfully held"应为"with Shanghai SBM, was successfully held"。 14. "which is well-known enterprises"应为"which are well-known enterprises"。 15. "Demand(multiple):"应在"Demand"与"(multiple):"之间添加空格。 16. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）"中的右括号应为半角括号")"。 17. "Consultation"前缺少标点符号（例如句号或冒号）。 其他问题: - "Product Center"段落前缺少标点，可以考虑添加冒号或句点。 请确认这些更改。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "ratory Crusher" 应为 "Rotary Crusher"。 2. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" 中 "WhatsApp:" 后面应加空格，改为 "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616"。 3. “Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189” 和 “0086-21-58386176” 的格式一致性需要保留，如果要保持前面的格式，应为 “Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189” 和 “Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386176”。 4. “Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd.” 应检查年份是否正确。当前年份为2023。 5. “Get Solution Online Chat” 可能是“Get Solutions Online Chat” 更为恰当。 6. "Back" 和 "Top" 需要与其他文本格式保持一致性，如大小写。 7. "...tags[i].href+c;}}" 可能需要调整为 "tags[i].href += c;}}" 以确保链接的正确拼接。 其余文本未发现其他问题。