【第 1 段建议】: 1. "World's" 应为 "Worlds'"（复数形式）。 2. "Was" 应为 "was"（小写）。 3. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact"（字母 'l' 错误）。 4. "l" 应为 "I"（大写）。 5. "EPCO" 可能需要确认是否为正确拼写或缩写。 6. "fir" 应为 "first"（拼写错误）。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "t VGM Aggregates System Was Made Its First Appearance" - "t" 应为 "The" 2. "The World's first VGM Aggregates System Was Made Its First Appearance" - "Was" 应为 "was"（小写） 3. "Aggregate Industry" - 应为 "Aggregates Industry"（复数） 4. "the reported was unveiled" - "reported" 应为 "report"（名词形式不当） 5. "the VGM Aggregates System is an advanced process system for high-quality aggregates" - "aggregates" 应为 "Aggregates"（首字母大写以符合前文提及的体裁） 6. "involves through all the links" - "involves" 应为 "involves"（需要修改为 "involves"“，可能为拼写错误） 7. "what plants are planted when mines are repaired" - 更恰当表述为 "what types of plants are used once mines are restored" 8. "the hazy future of aggregates industry clearer" - "aggregates industry" 应为 "aggregates industry"（首字母应大写以保持一致，且前面应加上 “the”） 9. "very valuable reference to entire industry" - "entire industry" 应为 "the entire industry"（需加上冠词“the”） 10. "high-quality development of whole aggregates industry" - "whole aggregates industry" 应为 "the whole aggregates industry"（需加上冠词“the”） 11. "satisfy any of your needs including equipment selection" - "any of your needs including" 更恰当的表述为 "any of your needs, including"（应加上合适的逗号） 请注意，我对整数和符号的英文描述加以修正，而必须纠正有关大写或小写以及复数或单数形式的词汇，以确保语句的正确性和一致性。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. “brochures, catalogs）”中的右括号应为英文符号，应该改为“brochures, catalogs)” 2. “WhatsApp:+86 13761974616”中的“WhatsApp:”与电话号码之间应有空格，应改为“WhatsApp: +86 13761974616” 3. “Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189”与“0086-21-58386176”之间应添加一个换行或连接符，以明确其为同一类别中的不同项。 4. “Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd. Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us”中“Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us”用竖线分割，应增加空格，如“Website Map | Legal Notice | Contact Us” 5. “for PPC参数传递”中的“参数传递”应翻译为英文，以保持语言的一致性，建议改为“for PPC parameter transmission”或类似的英文翻译。 **总结：** 发现了拼写、符号和语言一致性的问题。