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URL: https://www.sbmchina.com/media/news/2530.html

AI 检查建议:

【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" (字母 'l' 应为 'I') 2. "SMP Crushing Plant" 应为 "SMP Crushing Plants" (单复数不一致) 3. "Tower Sand-making System" 应为 "Tower Sand-Making System" (标点不一致,应大写'M'和'K') 其他部分无错误。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "SBM, the Mining Machinery Export Champion under B&R Initiative" - should have "the" before "B&R Initiative." 2. "the Second China International Import Expo" - should be "the second China International Import Expo." 3. "in the Eyes of One Cust" - appears to be an incomplete sentence or fragment; should be "in the Eyes of One Customs officer." 4. "SBM actively responds to the B&R initiative" - should use "B&R Initiative" for consistency in capitalization. 5. "in its development by putting forward the B&R initiative" - should use "B&R Initiative" for consistency in capitalization. 6. "the export volume No.1 in China's mining machinery industry" - should be "the No. 1 export volume in China's mining machinery industry." 7. "to 49 of 65 members of B&R Initiative" - should use "B&R Initiative" for consistency in capitalization. 8. "last November" - should specify "November 2019" for clarity. 9. "by more than 10 countries" - should be "by more than 10 country markets" for clarity. 10. "the enormous strength of SBM as a private enterprise" - would be clearer as "the enormous strength of SBM, as a private enterprise," to improve readability. 11. "Opinions of the CPC Central Committee and the State Council on Creating a Better Environment for Development and Supporting Private" - appears to be an incomplete sentence or fragment; it should be completed or removed. --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "sate-owned enterprises" 应为 "state-owned enterprises" 2. "5 transportation modes" 可以更明确为 "five transportation modes" 3. "the full more easily" 表达不流畅,可以考虑更改为 "to the full more easily" 或 "more easily to the full" 4. "2019, Lin-gang Special Area" 中的逗号应删除,改为 "2019 Lin-gang Special Area" --- 【第 4 段建议】: 1. "and customized solution are decisive" -> "and customized solutions are decisive" 2. "which can ascribe to its pioneering" -> "which can be ascribed to its pioneering" 3. "together to explore new materials, develop new products and create new technologies." -> "together to explore new materials, develop new products, and create new technologies." 4. "the brand's international influence." -> "the brand's international influences." 5. "Demand(multiple):" -> "Demand (multiple):" 6. "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" -> "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" 7. "About SBM" -> "About SBM: " 8. "Copyright © 2026" -> "Copyright © 2023" (assuming the current year is 2023 based on the data training limit). Other than that, the rest of the text seems to be correct.
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