【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" 应为 "Vertical Shaft Impact Crusher" （将小写的 "l" 改为大写的 "I"）。 2. "EPCO" 应为 "EPC" （通常指工程、采购和建设服务的缩写，不常见为 "EPCO"）。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. “supports from our customers” should be “support from our customers.” 2. “The 2019 party mainly include” should be “The 2019 party mainly includes.” 3. “staffs” should be “staff.” 4. “seek development” may be more clearly expressed as “seeking development.” 5. “Hats off to you!” should be added punctuation (exclamation point should be in the same format as other sentences). 6. Use of " and ” should be replaced with proper quotation marks (“ and ”). --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" - The closing parenthesis should be a regular parenthesis, not a Chinese one. It should be "Materials (brochures, catalogs)". 2. "Demand(multiple):" - There should be a space between "Demand" and "(multiple):". It should be "Demand (multiple):". 3. "After-sales Services & Spare Parts" - The term "After-sales" should be consistently hyphenated if "After-sales Services" is treated as a single concept throughout the text. 4. "WhatsApp" - The repetition of "WhatsApp" in the list may not be necessary if it was meant to be a single line. If it is intentional, then it's acceptable as is. 5. "Copyright © 2026" - This may be a future date error, please verify if 2026 is correct or if it should be the current year. 6. "design, technical support," - There is an extra space between the comma and "technical". 7. "Facebook Linkedin Youtube Instagram Tiktok" - There should be commas between these social media platforms for clarity: "Facebook, Linkedin, Youtube, Instagram, Tiktok". 8. Inconsistent spacing before and after some sections. Standardizing spacing may improve readability. Overall, attention should also be given to possible inconsistencies in formatting—such as the treatment of lists and sections.