【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"。 2. "Spiral Classifier"前的空格应去掉（即"High Weir Spiral Classifier"和"Submerged Spiral Classifier"）。 3. "Semi-mobile"中间的"-"应该为短横线（即"Semimobile"）。 4. "EPCO" 和 "IoT Digital Solution"中的空格应去掉（应确保统一格式）。 请注意，这些问题涉及到拼写、标点、格式、以及短横线的使用。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "It's held once two years" should be "It's held once every two years." 2. "statistics shows" should be "statistics show." 3. "the hardship of a great team" is awkward; consider rephrasing for clarity. 4. "over past 30 years" should be "over the past 30 years." 5. "to bring you best crushing and grinding equipment" should be "to bring you the best crushing and grinding equipment." 6. "100,00m2" should be "100,000 m²." 7. "To there" should be "There." 8. "By free combinations" is awkward; consider rephrasing for clarity. 9. "much attention on services" should be "great attention to services." 10. "our cozy café" should be corrected to "our cozy café." --- 【第 3 段建议】: 发现的问题： 1. "including equipment selection, scheme design, technical support" 中的 "scheme design" 前多了一个空格，应该为 "scheme design, technical support"。 2. "WhatsApp" 所在位置重复出现。 3. "Demand(multiple):" 中的 "Demand(multiple):" 后缺少空格，应该为 "Demand (multiple):"。 4. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 中的右括号应为英文形式，应该为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)"。 5. "EPCO Service" 应为 "EPC Service"（假设是指工程、采购和施工，一般写作 EPC）。 6. "Parts" 后无标点符号，建议添加句号或其他标点符号以与前一项保持一致。 7. "Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us" 中的 "Map|" 应该为 "Map |"，建议在“Map”和“|”之间添加空格以保持一致性。 请进行修正。