【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" - "lmpact"应为"Impact"，首字母应为"I"。 2. "EPCO" - 如果意为"EPC"（工程、采购、施工），则应为"EPC"而不是"EPCO"。 3. "Home > News > Warm Greetings to Our Dear Visitors from LAMIC" - 为了清晰，建议在“News”后添加“>”符号，以便与“Warm”分隔。 这些是发现的问题。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. “Summary：” should be “Summary:” 2. “(in short, LAMIC）came” should be “(in short, LAMIC) came” (wrong bracket type) 3. “&quot;Intelligence, Digitalization, New Materials and New Technologies in Manufacturing Industry&quot;” should be ““Intelligence, Digitalization, New Materials and New Technologies in Manufacturing Industry”” (incorrect quotation marks) 4. “wishes for deeper communication” should be “wishes for a deeper communication” (missing article) 5. “win-win” should be “win-win.” (missing punctuation) 6. “…with our visitors together.” should be “…with our visitors.” (removing “together” for clarity) 7. “**” should not be there (unnecessary symbol) 8. “Demand(multiple):” should be “Demand (multiple):” (space needed before '(') 9. “Materials (brochures, catalogs）” should be “Materials (brochures, catalogs)” (wrong bracket type) 10. “To be Our Agent” should be “To Be Our Agent” (capitalization for consistency) 11. “After-sales Services & Spare Parts” should be “After-sales Services & Spare Parts.” (missing punctuation) --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "WhatsApp" 应该用空格分开，修改为 "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616"。 2. "Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us" 应该用分号或其他标点分隔，建议修改为 "Website Map; Legal Notice; Contact Us"。 3. "d=document.domain;c=location.search;tags = document.getElementsByTagName("a");for(var i=0;i-1)" 中的 "i-1" 似乎是错误的，应该是 "i < tags.length"。 4. "PPC参数传递" 这一行的语言不一致，建议改为统一语言的描述，例如，“PPC parameter transmission”。 请注意其他特殊符号是否符合使用规范。