【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"（"l"应为"I"）。 2. "Belt Conveyor"后面缺少空格和大写字母，应为"Bulk Material Handling"段落的标题。 3. "SMP Crushing Plant"可能需要上下文确认是否是专有名词，若不是，需考虑是否需改为适当名词格式。 4. "EPCO"应确认是缩写，若是，则无需修改；若不是应考虑改写。 此外，建议将各部分的排版做适当调整，确保一致性。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "removal" should be "relocation." 2. "SBMers" should be "SBMers." 3. "unit of China Aggregates Association" should be "unit of the China Aggregates Association." 4. "Marching towards global markets" should probably be lowercase "marching towards global markets" as it continues from the previous sentence. 5. "laid a foundation" should be "was laid." 6. "after establishment" should be "after its establishment." 7. "join of new members" should be "addition of new members." 8. "3 projects of Qidong manufacturing base, new headquarters and Lingang manufacturing base" should be "three projects: Qidong manufacturing base, new headquarters, and Lingang manufacturing base." 9. "SBM & Technology Group Co., Ltd." should use "&" instead of "&". 10. "turkey projects" should be "turnkey projects." --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "R&D" should be replaced with "R&D". 2. The word "Demand(multiple):" should have a space before "(multiple):" - "Demand (multiple):". 3. In the list under "Demand(multiple):", the item "After-sales Services & Spare Parts" should maintain consistent casing, either "After-sales Services & Spare Parts" (with "Services" capitalized) or "after-sales services & spare parts" (all lowercase). 4. The word "Facebook" should not be capitalized in the context of "Messages" if it is intended for a list of platforms. 5. The text "Message" is singular, but "Messages" implies plural; clarify intended meaning. 6. The line "Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd." is future-dated. Verify if it should be "2023". 7. There is a missing closing tag for the unordered list that should be indicated if parent elements are closed. 8. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" should have a space after "WhatsApp:" - "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616". 9. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189" should be consistent in formatting; consider if "0086" is fully necessary. 10. The use of "and" before the last item in lists should be checked for consistency throughout the text.