【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Party:Gather" 应加空格为 "Party: Gather" 2. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" 中的 "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" 3. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" 中的 "Weir" 后面多了一个空格，应为 "High Weir Spiral Classifier" 4. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 中的 "Submerged" 后面多了一个空格，应为 "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 5. "SMP Crushing Plant" 应为 "SMP Crushing Plants"（假设在上下文中是指多个植物或设备） 6. "SERVICE" 应为 "Services" 或 "Service"（与其他项目保持一致） 7. "Belt Conveyor" 下方没有明确说明是单数还是复数，建议使用 "Conveyors" 如果指多个输送机。 8. "Truck Unloader" 下方没有明确说明是单数还是复数，建议使用 "Unloaders" 如果指多个卸货机。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "staffs" should be "staff". 2. "persons" should be "people". 3. "took" should be "taken." 4. "3 systems--- production system, marketing system and functional system respectively." should be "3 systems—production system, marketing system, and functional system, respectively." 5. "all staffs stood up" should be "all staff stood up." 6. There should be a space before the first "&" in "individual & team." 7. "faraway" should be "far away." 8. "Chorus show "Enter a New Era"" should be "Chorus show "Enter a New Era"." 9. "Gala Show" should be "Gala show" for consistency. 10. A comma is needed after "Overall" and "So" in the sentence "So, to encourage employees". --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "delicacies for every staff" - should be "delicacies for all staff" or "delicacies for every staff member." 2. "Demand(multiple):" - should have a space after "Demand" - "Demand (multiple):" 3. "brochures, catalogs）" - should have a closing parenthesis instead of a bracket - "brochures, catalogs)" 4. " whatsapp" - should be capitalized - "WhatsApp" 5. "0086-21-58386189" - should be formatted consistently with a space or hyphen; e.g., "0086 21 58386189" or "0086-21-5838-6189" 6. "0076-21-58386176" - should be formatted consistently with a space or hyphen; e.g., "0086 21 58386176" or "0086-21-5838-6176" 7. "Tiktok" - should be "TikTok" (correct capitalization). Please review these corrections.