【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"（字母“l”应为“I”）。 2. "lmpact Crusher"应为"Impact Crusher"（同上）。 3. "Wastes"在这个上下文中可以保持为"Waste"（去掉“s”）。 4. "中文"、"Русский"、"Español"、"العربية"、"Français"、和"Português"后面需要添加句点（未统一标点）。 5. "EPCO"可能是一个错误，通常是"EPC"（请确认）。 6. "HOME"、"BUSINESS"、"PRODUCT"和"CASES"未统一标点，建议统一加句点或不加。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "SBM's regular customer" - "SBM" should be defined at its first mention as "Shibang Machinery" for clarity. 2. "the inherent impression of abandoned mine" - "the inherent impression of abandoned mines" (plural). 3. "which can be used in concrete production" - change to "which can be used in concrete production" for consistency. 4. "the exploitation of natural resources and protects" - should be "the exploitation of natural resources while protecting". 5. "which is definitely a first of its kind in China." - suggestion to rephrase for clarity: "which is a first of its kind in China." 6. "run" - should be "runs" to agree with the subject "operation". 7. "solid wastes (including tailings and construction wastes) about" - add "of" to become "solid wastes (including tailings and construction wastes) of about". 8. "which can realize real-time monitoring" - consider changing "realize" to "achieve" for better clarity. 9. "Jaw Crusher", "Cone Crusher", "Gyratory Crusher", "Mobile Crusher" - consider adding additional context or descriptions to specify the types if necessary (not a strict error, just a suggestion for completeness).