【第 2 段建议】: 1. "equipment is running well almost without repairing" 应改为 "equipment is running well almost without repairs"。 2. "requirement on product's quality" 应改为 "requirement for product quality"。 3. "SBM's products are perfect" 建议改为 "The SBM products are perfect"。 4. “capacity has exceeded our expectations while equipment is running well” 中的“while”可考虑改为“and”以改善句子流畅度。 5. "Mr Zhang, Project leader" 应改为 "Mr. Zhang, Project Leader"（在“Mr.”后加句点，且“Project Leader”应首字母大写）。 6. "Application: Baolan high speed railway construction" 应改为 "Application: Baolan high-speed railway construction"（添加连字符）。 7. "VSI5X1145 centrifugal impact crusher (1 set)" 建议改为 "VSI5X1145 centrifugal impact crusher (one set)"（建议使用"one"代替数字以保持一致性）。 其它地方均无错误。