【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" 中的 "lmpact" 应为 "Impact"。 2. "SMP Crushing Plant" 大小写不一致，建议统一为 "SMP Crushing plant"。 3. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" 中的两个空格应合并为一个。 4. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 中的两个空格应合并为一个。 5. "Aggregates Belt Conveyor" 应为 "Aggregates belt conveyor" 以保持一致性。 6. "EPCO" 可能是一个缩写，根据上下文可能需要确认为大写或保持一致。 7. "Pipe Jacking Machine" 应为 "Pipe jacking machine" 以保持一致性。 8. "Shield Machine" 应为 "Shield machine" 以保持一致性。 9. "Operation Details of Raymond Mi" 中的 "Mi" 应为 "Mill"。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "help for clients' understanding" should be "helpful for clients' understanding". 2. "the before starting operation and after startup operation details" should be "the details before starting operation and after startup operation". 3. "the electric energy" should be "electric energy". 4. "you need to check the electric circuit is normal" should be "you need to check that the electric circuit is normal". 5. "Before Raymond mill work" should be "Before the Raymond mill works". 6. "need handle lubrication" should be "need to handle lubrication". 7. "The handle lubrication will need open" should be "The handle lubrication will need to open". 8. "and clean them to lubricating" should be "and clean them for lubrication". 9. "can directly adding oil" should be "can directly add oil". 10. "the machine is loose and have dangerous" should be "the machine is loose and has danger". 11. "it needs to adjust the classifier speed and motor exhaust air volume" should be "it needs to adjust the classifier speed and the motor exhaust air volume". 12. "After Startup Operation Detailed Of Raymond Mill" should be "After Startup Operation Details Of Raymond Mill". 13. "you can start up the machine" should be "you can start the machine up". 14. "the details of Raymond mill include: when the Raymond mill works" should be "the details of operating the Raymond mill include: when the Raymond mill works". 15. "and they cannot be open" should be "and they cannot be opened". 16. "prevent the inner materials will hurt people" should be "prevent the inner materials from hurting people". 17. "it cannot have the operation work, maintain work, no lubrication" should be "there cannot be operational work, maintenance work, or lack of lubrication". 18. "and these can guarantee the machine in normal operation state" should be "and these ensure that the machine is in a normal operational state". 19. "When you are ensure" should be "When you are sure". 20. "and it can go on working continuously" should be "and it can continue working". 21. "when the Raymond mill system stops in the p" is incomplete and requires clarification or completion. --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "rocessing process" 应为 "Processing process" 2. "WhatsApp" 出现了两次，可能是多余的。 3. "Demand(multiple):" 中 "Demand" 和 "(multiple):" 之间缺少空格，应为 "Demand (multiple):" 4. "20-58386189" 文件中的 "20" 与电话号码之间缺少空格，应为 "0086-21-58386189" 5. "20-58386176" 文件中的 "20" 与电话号码之间缺少空格，应为 "0086-21-58386176" 6. “after-sales service” 中的 “after-sales” 应大写为 “After-sales” 以保持一致性。 7. “Stone Crusher In Ethiopia” 中的 “In” 应为小写，即 “Stone Crusher in Ethiopia” 来保持一致性。 请注意：还有关于“日历”的内容缺失，可能需要添加“日期”或“月份”。