【第 1 段建议】: 1. “Reasons And Solutions About Fracture In Vibrating Screen”应该为“Reasons and Solutions About Fracture in Vibrating Screen” (大小写不一致) 2. “Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher”中的“lmpact”应为“Impact” (字母错误) 3. “Bulk Material Handling”中的“Wheeled Bulk Reception Feeder”似乎不常见，可能更常用的表达方式是“Wheeled Bulk Reception Feeders”（单复数不一致） 4. “EPCO”后面缺少一个“” (不一致性) 5. “lmpact”应更正为“Impact” (拼写错误) --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "rating Screen"应该为"Rating Screen"。 2. "Reasons And Solutions About Fracture In Vibrating Screen"应该为"Reasons and Solutions About Fracture in Vibrating Screen"（"And"小写）。 3. "According to principle of fracture mechanics"应为"According to the principle of fracture mechanics"（缺少定冠词"the"）。 4. "reasons about solutions about fracture"应为"reasons and solutions about fracture"（重复使用"about"不当，应为"and"）。 5. "failure Of Anti-Vibrating Spring"应为"Failure of Anti-Vibrating Spring"（"Of"小写）。 6. "long time force"应为"long-time force"（应为复合形容词）。 7. "this problem"后应加“.”（缺少句号）。 8. "the material to make the spring is 60Si2MnA"应为"the material used to make the spring is 60Si2MnA"（不太准确的表述）。 9. "to make the vibrating screen vibrates"应为"to make the vibrating screen vibrate"（动词"vibrates"应为原形）。 10. "shows the inconformity of amplitudes"应为"shows the inconformity in amplitudes"（改为介词"in"更合适）。 11. "the fracture of connection parts or crack of welded junctions" 应为 "the fractures of connection parts or cracks of welded junctions"（应使用复数形式或一致的单复数形式）。 12. "The Plumb Line Of Eccentric Gear Is Not Coincide With The Natural Plumb Line"应为"The Plumb Line of Eccentric Gear Does Not Coincide with the Natural Plumb Line"（"Is not"应改为"does not"以及小写“of”）。 13. "not uniformity"应为"not uniform"（"uniformity"的用法不当）。 14. "that cause the fracture"应为"that causes the fracture"（主谓一致，"that"单数以"causes"为单数）。 15. "are several reasons, including"后应加“.”（缺少句号）。 请修正这些问题。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "so easy" should be "so easily" for correct adverb usage. 2. "WhatsApp" should be consistently formatted; in some instances, it's repeated. 3. "Demand(multiple):" should have a space after "Demand". 4. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" should replace the closing parenthesis with a proper one: "Materials (brochures, catalogs)". 5. "Product Center" and "Service Support" should have consistent formatting whether they are bold or not, depending on your style choices. 6. The dates "Copyright © 2026" may be incorrect if this is meant to be current; ensure the year matches the current date. 7. Inconsistent use of spacing around punctuation, especially commas and periods. 8. The section names and categories (e.g., "Hot Sale", "Popular Blog", "Latest Blog") should have consistent capitalization style.