【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" - "lmpact" should be "Impact" (capitalization issue). 2. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" - There are two spaces between "Weir" and "Spiral"; it should be one space. 3. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" - There are two spaces between "Submerged" and "Spiral"; it should be one space. 4. "SMP Crushing Plant" - "SMP" should be spelled out or clarified if it is an acronym. 5. "Services" section - The items listed (EPCO, IoT Digital Solution, etc.) should be consistently capitalized, with some items in different formats. The style should be uniform throughout. (Note: Certain terms like "EPCO" may require clarification for consistency, but are not necessarily spelling errors.) --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "avialble" 应为 "available" 2. "coarse aggregates" 建议改为 "coarse aggregate" 3. "screens separate" 之后缺少逗号：应为 "screens, separate" 4. "set-up" 应为 "setup" 5. "Plant" 中的 "Portable" 和 "complete" 应该在同一行 6. "Customer service guaranteed" 应为 "Customer Service Guaranteed" 以保持一致性 7. "Get Solution & Quotation" 中的 "Get" 应改为 "Get" 的首字母大写，以保持一致性 8. "Demand(multiple):" 中的 "Demand(" 和 "multiple):" 之间需要空格。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" - 使用了错误的右括号，正确应为“)” 2. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" - 应在“WhatsApp:”和号码之间留一个空格。 3. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189 0086-21-58386176" - 两个电话号码之间应添加分隔符，如换行、分号或斜杠，以提高可读性。 4. "Copyright © 2026" – 若未来日期应为“Copyright © 2023”。 5. "Youtube" - 应为" YouTube" (注意大小写）。 6. "Tiktok" - 应为" TikTok" (注意大小写）。 正确的修改如下： - Materials (brochures, catalogs) - WhatsApp: +86 13761974616 - Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189 / 0086-21-58386176 - Copyright © 2023 - YouTube - TikTok