【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" 中的 "l" 应为 "I"。 2. "EPCO" 和其他服务项目的一致性问题，可能需要全部保持大写或小写。 3. "Home > Case > Aggregate > 150-250t/h Pebble Crushing Plant" 中不需要斜杠后跟空格。 其他部分无问题。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "planed" 应为 "planned" 2. "which enhance" 应为 "which enhances" 3. "the stability and durability" 之前缺少 "of" 应为 "which enhances the stability and durability of the equipment" 4. "simpler and safer than" 前缺少 "is" 应为 "which is simpler and safer than" 5. "the crushing chamber adopts" 前缺少 "and" 应为 "the crushing chamber adopts and has" 6. "coincident to stipulated width" 应为 "coincides with the stipulated width" 7. "multi cavities" 应为 "multicavities" 8. "uses intelligent touch screen control display" 前缺少 "an" 应为 "uses an intelligent touch screen control display" 9. "can observe working process" 应为 "can observe the working process" 10. "but high efficiency and large capacity" 前应加 "has" 应为 "but has high efficiency and large capacity" 11. "has good quality which can replace" 应为 "has good quality, which can replace" 12. "the function of gravel production and shaping" 前应加 "the functions of gravel production and shaping" 13. "Consultation" 后的 "S" 应去掉以保持一致性。