【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"（字符"l"应为"I"）。 2. "How t"似乎是一个不完整的句子，可能是多余的。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "upper parts we call it" should be "upper parts, which we call". 2. "broken according to the principle" should be "broken according to the principle of the material layer". 3. "of the cone crusher than other mine crushing equipment" should add "it has a" before "higher production efficiency". 4. "the lower sheet material makes" could be clarified by changing "sheet material" to "material". 5. "the production efficiency of the cone" should be "the cone crusher's production efficiency". 6. "the effective specifications of the equipment compared with the traditional crusher" should be "the effective specifications of the equipment compared to those of the traditional crusher". 7. "with the new cone crusher has increased" should be "of the new cone crusher has increased". 8. "greatly reducing the energy consumption of the entire mine production line" could be improved by saying "thereby greatly reducing the energy consumption of the entire mine production line". 9. In the "Latest Blog" and "Popular Blog" sections, the titles should consistently capitalize all significant words (e.g., "The 10 Best Ship Loader Manufacturers in the World" instead of "The 10 Best Ship Loader Manufacturers in The World"). --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "Demand(multiple):" 应为 "Demand (multiple):"（在 "Demand" 和 "(" 之间加空格）。 2. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" 应为 "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616"（在 "WhatsApp:" 和 "+86" 之间加空格）。 3. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189 0086-21-58386176" 应为 "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189, 0086-21-58386176"（在两个电话号码之间加逗号）。