【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" 中的 "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" (字母 "l" 应为大写字母 "I")。 2. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" 中的双空格应为单空格。 3. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 中的双空格应为单空格。 4. "Ground & Beneficiation" 中的拼写应为 "Grinding & Beneficiation" （“Ore Grinding”应一致）。 5. "Aggregates Belt Conveyor" 和 "Wheeled Bulk Reception Feeder" 等条目应首字母大写的一致性保持。 6. "EPCO" 应为 "EPC"（如果是指“工程、采购、建筑”）。 7. "Life-cycle Service" 中的 hyphen 是可选的，请确认是否保持一致。 注意：请再次确认是否存在需要更改的特定格式或用词，以确保准确性。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "Summary："应为"Summary: " 2. "there are many production cases have shown"应为"there are many production cases that have shown" 3. "has making great progress"应为"has made great progress" 4. "occupational area"前应加上"the"（两处） 5. "saves"应为"save" 6. "percent energy consumption"应为"percent of energy consumption" 7. "high wear-resisting"应为"high wear resistance" 8. "The mill equips automatic control system"应为"The mill is equipped with an automatic control system" 9. "good for adjustment"应为"good for adjustments" 10. "and works under negative pressure, so that there is no dust spilling"应为"and works under negative pressure, ensuring that there is no dust spillage" --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "the emission standard" 应改为 "the emissions standard" 2. "so that the materials can be ground to the desired fineness (0.045-0.02mm) in one time" 应改为 "so that the materials can be ground to the desired fineness (0.045-0.02 mm) in one go." 3. "without manual operation" 应改为 "without any manual operation." 4. "independent roller lubrication system can fully lubricate and prevent oil leakage" 应改为 "the independent roller lubrication system can fully lubricate and prevent oil leakage." 5. “well-sealed, no dust spill” 应改为 “well-sealed and no dust spill.” 6. "help you to reduce costs" 应改为 "help you reduce costs." 7. "the design and consultation of grinding project" 应改为 "the design and consultation of grinding projects." 8. "Get Solution & Quotation" 应改为 "Get Solution & Quotations." 9. "Please fill out the form bel" 应改为 "Please fill out the form below." --- 【第 4 段建议】: 1. "Demand(multiple):" 应为 "Demand (multiple):" 2. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 应为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)"，右括号应为半角。 3. "Service Support" 下的 "Parts" 一行，与其他项目在样式上不一致，建议检查是否需更改或增加项。 4. "Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd." 这里的年份在文本中是2026，您可能要核对是否应为当前年份。 5. "function(w,d,s,l,i){" 前面应该有空格以增强可读性。 6. 注释 "// for PPC参数传递" 这里的英文解释可能需要更准确的翻译。 其他部分无明显拼写、单复数或标点错误。