【第 1 段建议】: 1. "4 Important Steps Must Be Done" 应为 "4 Important Steps Must Be Taken"。 2. "lmpact" 中的 "l" 应为 "I"，应为 "Impact"。 3. "Life-cycle" 的连字符可能需要进一步确认，通常为 "Lifecycle" 或 "Life Cycle"。 4. "EPCO" 需要确认是否为正确的缩写，如果是专有名词则无误。 5. "Must Be Don" 中的 "Don" 应为 "Done"。 请确认以上更正。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "There are many investors intend to invest" should be "There are many investors intending to invest." 2. "in recent year" should be "in recent years." 3. "choose a right manufacturer" should be "choose the right manufacturer." 4. "uses can choose" should be "users can choose." 5. "the realizing of wearing parts" should be "the reliability of wearing parts." 6. "All the above that other ways can’t do" should be "All the above that other ways can’t achieve." 7. "hard to find a proper company with large scale and strong strength" should be "hard to find a proper company with a large scale and strong capabilities." 8. "after purchasing the sand making equ" is incomplete and should be revised for clarity. --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "provide"应为"provides"，主语为"SBM"（单数）。 2. "the above mentioned"应为"the above-mentioned"（添加连字符）。 3. "the 10 Best Ship Loader Manufacturers in The World"中"The"不应大写。 4. 在“Demand(multiple):”和“Equipment”之间缺少空格，格式应为“Demand (multiple):”。 5. "WhatsApp"下方的两次出现重复。 6. "After-sales Services & Spare Parts"中的“&”建议改为“and”，以统一格式。 7. "Service Support"下的"EPCO Service"与"IoT Service"等后需添加冒号以保持一致性与规范性。