【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" - "l"应该为"I"。 2. "SMP Crushing Plant" - 如果"SMP"是一个缩写，应该用大写字母，确保一致性。 3. "EPCO" - 如果是缩写，应确保在其他地方的一致处理。 4. "Mobile Crusher Manufactur" - "Manufactur"应为"Manufacturer"。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "crusheris"应为"crusher is"。 2. "company of mobile crusher"应为"companies of mobile crushers"。 3. "small manufacturer"应为"small manufacturers"。 4. "mobile crushercompanies"应为"mobile crusher companies"。 5. "high-qualityequipment"应为"high-quality equipment"。 6. "crusher, grinding milland other mining equipment"应为"crusher, grinding mill and other mining equipment"。 7. "there also has a lot of"应为"there are also a lot of"。 8. "helpedcustomers"应为"helped customers"。 9. "a lot economic benefits"应为"a lot of economic benefits"。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "mobile crusherconsists" 应为 "mobile crusher consists" 2. "metal mine, construction stone and solid waste disposal." 应为 "metal mines, construction stones, and solid waste disposal." 3. "customer's" 应为 "customers'" 4. "big company rather thanless known" 应为 "big company rather than less known" 5. "it not only has trouble" 应为 "it not only causes trouble" 6. "Get Price More" 应为 "Get Price & More" 7. "Demands(multiple)" 应为 "Demand (multiple)" 8. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 应为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)"，括号内的标点应为英文格式的括号，即 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)"。 9. “Stone Crusher In Ethiopia” 应为 “Stone Crusher in Ethiopia” 以统一格式。