【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"（字母“l”错误）。 2. "高 Weir Spiral Classifier"应为"High Weir Spiral Classifier"（多余空格）。 3. "Tower Sand-making System"中的“Sand-making”可改为“Sand Making”，提高一致性（指标准）。 4. "EPCO"可能需要确认是否为正确拼写，如果是缩写，需保持一致性。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "includes" should be "include" (singular to plural consistency). 2. "The screen angle has close relation" should be "The screen angle has a close relation" (missing article). 3. "between 15-25бу" should be "between 15°-25°" (correct degree symbol). 4. "between 0-8бу" should be "between 0°-8°" (correct degree symbol). 5. "the amplitude is chose" should be "the amplitude is chosen" (incorrect form of the verb). --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "aw material" 应为 "raw material"。 2. "the amplitude of linear vibrating screen is between 3.5-6mm" 中 "3.5-6mm" 应改为 "3.5 mm to 6 mm"。 3. "vibration frequency" 和 "vibration frequency" 中的 "vibration frequency" 应统一使用大小写。 4. "the service life of vibrating screen" 应为 "the service life of the vibrating screen"。 5. "the 10 Best Ship Loader Manufacturers in The World" 中的 "The" 应小写，改为 "the"。 6. "Demand(multiple):" 前应加空格，改为 "Demand (multiple):"。 7. "to be Our Agent" 中的 "Our" 应小写，改为 "our"。 8. "Operational Support" 改为 "operational support" 以保持一致性。 9. "Submit Consultation" 中应加空格，改为 "Submit Consultation"。