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AI 检查建议:
【第 1 段建议】:
1. "lmpact"应为"Impact"(字母'l'拼写错误)。
2. "Spiral Classifier"前的"High Weir"和"Submerged"之间多了一个空格。
3. "Aggregates Belt Conveyor"应为"Aggregates Belt Conveyors"(复数形式)。
4. "Truck Unloader"前应有拼接多项内容的连字符,如"Truck Unloader"。
5. "EPCO"应为"EPC"(常见缩写为"EPC")。
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【第 2 段建议】:
1. "f ball mill"应为"Ball mill"。
2. "10 tips to improve the grinding efficiency of ball mill"应改为"10 Tips to Improve the Grinding Efficiency of the Ball Mill"。
3. "the wear of the lining plate and grinding balls of ball mill"应改为"the wear of the lining plate and grinding balls of the ball mill"。
4. "the productivity of ball mill"应改为"the productivity of the ball mill"。
5. "“More crushing and less grinding”"应使用英文引号或改为"More crushing and less grinding"。
6. "the workload of the ball mill is bound to increase, and subsequently, the energy consumption and power consumption will also increase."可考虑简化为"the workload of the ball mill will increase, leading to higher energy and power consumption."以避免重复使用"increase"。
调整后的句子可能会改善文本的流畅性和准确性。
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【第 3 段建议】:
1. "particle s" 应为 "particles"
2. "filling rate at 45%~50%" 需要标点符号 "filling rate at 45% to 50%."
注意:在 "but the actual filling rate should be decided according to the situation..." 句子后面建议使用句号结束,而不是逗号。
请注意,文本的结构和行文流畅性也可能需要考虑,但这不在拼写和标点的校对范围内。
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【第 4 段建议】:
1. "can recovery of useful minerals in time." 应为 "can recover useful minerals in time."
2. "the amount of grinding, and on the other hand, can recovery of useful minerals in time." 中的 "can recovery" 应为 "can recover."
3. "the productivity of ball mill" 应为 "the productivity of the ball mill."
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【第 5 段建议】:
1. “many variable parameters in the grinding operation, and one change will inevitably lead to the successive changes of many factors” - Consider removing the comma after "operation" for better clarity.
2. “power consumption can be saved by 0.4~1.4kWh/t” - Consider using a space before “kWh/t” for consistency: "0.4~1.4 kWh/t."
3. “7 Types of Stone Crusher and How to Choose the Best?” - Consider changing the question mark to a period for consistency, as the other bullet points do not end with a question mark.
4. “CIP vs. CIL: Key Differences in Gold Cyanidation Processes” - Consider changing the colon to a period for consistency with bullet points format.
5. “Get Solution & Quotation” - Consider changing the ampersand (&) to "and" for consistency in text style.
6. “Please fill out the form below, and we can satisfy any of your needs” - Consider removing the comma after "below" for better clarity.
7. “Demand(multiple):” - There should be a space between "Demand" and "(multiple)" for consistency: "Demand (multiple):"
8. “Mobile Crusher Fo” - This seems to be an incomplete sentence and may need correction or more context.
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