【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" - "lmpact"应为"Impact" (小写字母“L”应为大写字母“I”) 2. "中文" - 应该有一个空格或标点符号与下方的语言分隔。 3. "EPCO" - 如果是缩写，请确认是否正确，应确定是否需要点 (E.P.C.O.)。 4. “HOME”, “BUSINESS”, “PRODUCT”, “CASES” - 跟随大写字母的标准化可以采取一致性。 5. "2020-0" - 应完整显示年份，缺少数字。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "Its significantly feature is that:" 应改为 "Its significant features are that:" 2. "Its advantages has the following parts:" 应改为 "Its advantages have the following parts:" 3. "it is suitable for two axle center distance larger occasions;" 中的 "larger" 应该改为 "larger" 更符合语境，但这句话的结构可能需要重新考虑。 4. "when it is overload," 应改为 "when it is overloaded," 5. "It will play safe and protection functions." 可以改为 "It will play safe and protective functions." 6. "Eccentric shaft is the main part involved the jaw crusher machine" 应改为 "Eccentric shaft is the main part involved in the jaw crusher machine" 7. "to do the compound pendulum movement." 可以改为 "to perform the compound pendulum movement." 8. "It will be with the fixed jaw plate form an angel to crush stone materials." 应改为 "It will form an angle with the fixed jaw plate to crush stone materials." 9. "jaw plate is jaw crusher's easy wear parts." 应改为 "the jaw plate is one of the jaw crusher's easily wear parts." 10. "is for its high abrasive resistance and the good tenacity." 可以改为 "is due to its high abrasive resistance and good tenacity." 11. “The 10 Best Ship Loader Manufacturers in The World” 中的“The” 应改为 “the”。 12. “7 Types of Stone Crusher and How to Choose the Best?” 中的“Best?” 应改为 “best?” 13. “Mobile” 之后没有完整的句子，可能需要补充完整内容。