【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" should be "Impact" (the letter "l" is incorrect). 2. "yo" should be "you" (the word is incomplete). --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "u" should be capitalized to "You." 2. The sentence "3 tips to help you solve the problem of blockage of vibrating screen, very useful!" should end with a period instead of an exclamation mark. 3. "Screen is a very important part of the vibrating screen." This sentence should be changed to "The screen is a very important part of the vibrating screen." 4. The phrase "the screen mesh" should be consistently referred to as "the screen meshes" or "the screen mesh" throughout the text. 5. "causing blockage, which is called critical blockage." The comma should be replaced with a period to end the sentence. 6. "Due to the crusher or the stone itself, there are many flake stone materials." This sentence could be clearer; consider rephrasing to remove redundancy. 7. "These particles cannot be smoothly passed" should be "These particles cannot pass smoothly." 8. "and causes hole blocking." should be "and cause hole blocking." to maintain subject-verb agreement. 9. "It should be noted that the screen with fixed mesh cannot effectively overcome the blockage of critical material particles on the screen," should be "the screens with fixed mesh" to ensure plural agreement. 10. "the screening efficiency of a vibrating screen with a fixed mesh screen is less than 50%." should be "the screening efficiency of vibrating screens with fixed mesh is less than 50%." for clarity. 11. "Moreover, increasing the amplitude may affect the service life of the screen." should be "the screens" for consistency in plural. 12. "we c" seems to be an incomplete sentence and should be completed. --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "an achieve" 应为 "achieve". 2. "mesh to be changed to" 应为 "mesh to change to". 3. "the direction of the mesh is different" 应为 "the directions of the mesh are different". 4. "adopting the anti-blocking screen with diamond-shaped mesh(as shown in the picture)" 应在"mesh"和"(as"之间添加空格，改为 "mesh (as shown in the picture)"。 5. "small vibrations" 应为 "small vibration". 6. "the feature of this screen is on its two adjacent screen bars—one is a static screen bar and the other is a moving screen bar" 应将"—"替换为"—"，并在"bars"后添加一个空格。 7. "Compare the performance of the three screens with square meshes, rectangular meshes and triangular meshes" 中的 "meshes" 应为 "mesh"。 8. "the screen with triangular hole is the preferred small mesh screen" 应添加 "the" 在 "triangular hole" 前，即"the screen with the triangular hole". 9. "two-dimensional fixed hole" 和 "three-dimensional variable mesh" 中的 "hole" 应为 "holes"。 10. "blocking is to expand the mesh of the screen" 中的 "mesh" 应为 "meshes"。 11. "the installation quality of the screen" 应为 "the installation quality of the screens"。 12. "not to be stretched not tightly" 应为 "not to be stretched tightly". 13. "How to Choose the Best?" 应为 "How to Choose the Best". 14. "Mobile Crusher for Construction Waste Recycling Plant" 应为"Mobile Crusher for a Construction Waste Recycling Plant". 15. "Get Price Mor" 应为 "Get Price More".