【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Trus" 应为 "Trust" 2. "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" (字母 "l" 应为 "I") --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "by adopted" should be "by adopting". 2. "to ensure more powerful production capacity and larger feed size." should not start with "to". It seems to be a fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence. 3. "make money." could be improved for clarity; while not strictly an error, it may imply a lack of substance. 4. "heavy-duty forging eccentric shaft with large eccentricity" could be clearer as "a heavy-duty forged eccentric shaft with large eccentricity." 5. "casting flywheel" should be "cast flywheel". 6. "can not only" should be "not only can" for better grammatical structure. 7. "product continuously in the ground" should be "produce continuously in the ground". 8. "The core components of C6X jaw stone crusher" should be "The core components of the C6X jaw stone crusher". 9. "One-to-one targeted design" should be followed by a colon instead of a period. 10. "customers' questions" should be "customers’ questions" (use of proper apostrophe). 11. "ensure that every customer has no worries after production" could be clearer as "to ensure that every customer has no worries after production." 12. "in coarse crus" seems like it is incomplete and should be revised or completed. Please check the context for potential sections that seem incomplete or vague. --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "What are you waiting for? Click here↓↓↓" - 应该在"here"和"↓↓↓"之间加一个空格。 2. "Equipment Materials (brochures, catalogs）" - "）"应改为")"。 3. "Demand(multiple):" - 在"Demand"和"("之间加一个空格。 4. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" - 应在"WhatsApp:"和"+86"之间加一个空格。 5. "Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us" - 在"Map"和"|Legal"之间加一个空格，以及在"Notice"和"|Contact"之间加一个空格。 这是我发现的所有问题。