【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" should be corrected to "Impact" (the letter "l" should be "I"). 2. "Screening" in "Mobile Crushing & Screening" should not have an ampersand; consider using "and" for consistency with other sections, e.g., "Mobile Crushing and Screening." 3. Inconsistent capitalizations in the navigation elements such as "Business," "Products," "Media," and "Contact" should match the style used in "HOME," "BUSINESS," "PRODUCT," "CASES" (either all capitals or standard title casing). 4. "EPCO" appears to be an inconsistent abbreviation; if "EPC" was intended, please clarify. 5. "Bulk Material Handling" is inconsistently capitalized compared to "Ore Grinding & Beneficiation" and other section headings (neither consistent in title casing nor all capitals). --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. “supply voltage” 应为“supply voltage.” 2. “by adjusting the amplitude of the vibrating screen.” 应为“by adjusting the amplitude of the vibrating screen.” 3. “too few” 应为“too few.” 4. “the amplitude of vibrating screen.” 应为“the amplitude of the vibrating screen.” 5. “the angle is, the larger the exciting force becomes, and the larger the amplitude becomes.” 应为“the angle is, the larger the exciting force becomes, and the larger the amplitude becomes.” 6. “So user can adjust” 应为“So users can adjust.” 7. “the funnel of the screen surface accumulate.” 应为“the funnel of the screen surface to accumulate.” 8. “the particle of material” 应为“the particles of material.” 9. “cann” 应为“can.” --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "was damaged" should be "were damaged" (subject-verb agreement). 2. "user should" should be "the user should" (missing article). 3. “it’s damaged” should be “it’s damaged” (incorrect character entity). 4. “whether it is to increase the weight of the eccentric block” should include “to” for clarity ("whether it is to increase the weight of the eccentric block"). 5. "vibrator" in "whether the vibrator is faulty" should be pluralized to "vibrators" for consistency with other instances of the word in plural contexts. 6. “will cause equipment damage” could be rephrased for formality to “might cause equipment damage” for clarity in a technical context. 7. "CIP vs. CIL: Key Differences in Gold Cyanidation Processes" should have a period at the end. 8. “We will contact you” is an informal structure and could be changed to “We will reach out to you” for a more formal tone. 9. “Materials (brochures, catalogs)” should have a closing parenthesis after “catalogs” for correct punctuation. 10. "To be Our Agent" should be lowercased as "to be our agent" for consistency in formatting. Please note that some suggestions are about style consistency rather than strict grammatical issues.