【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应更正为"Impact"。 2. "Semi-mobile"应该改为"Semi-Mobile"以保持一致性。 3. "SMP Crushing Plant"首字母应大写，保持标题格式。 4. "Tower Sand-making System"中的"Sand-making"通常不需要小写，应改为"Sand-Making"。 5. "Aggregates Belt Conveyor"中的"A"应该小写，改为"aggregates Belt Conveyor"以保持格式一致性。 6. "Truck Unloader"中的"U"应小写，改为"truck Unloader"以保持格式一致性。 7. "Radial Telescopic Stacker"中的"T"应小写，改为"radial Telescopic Stacker"以保持格式一致性。 8. "Home > Blog > What procedures are required to build"中的最后一句应加上句号。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "eq" 应为 "equipment"。 2. "multifarious of equipment components" 应为 "multifarious equipment components"。 3. "the establishment of a legal person company is necessary" 应为 "the establishment of a legal entity company is necessary"。 4. "Signed the agreement" 应为 "Sign the agreement"。 5. "it can be put into construction and production after being approved by the local government" 句子主语缺失，建议改为 "it can be put into construction and production after the local government approves it"。 6. "investment in the construction wastes of mobile crushing plant" 应为 "investment in the construction waste of a mobile crushing plant"。 7. "And many investors curious of mobile crusher price" 应为 "And many investors are curious about mobile crusher prices"。 8. "Mobile crushing plant can customize by your needs" 应为 "Mobile crushing plants can be customized according to your needs"。 9. "the price of steel and other raw materials is steadily rising" 这句话建议明确"and"前面的主语，改为 "the prices of steel and other raw materials are steadily rising"。 10. 行文中有多处未对齐的时间分隔符（如"2020-12-08"）和建议旁注部分没有类似格式整理，应根据具体格式要求进行整理。 请根据具体语境进行适当的修改和调整。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "ortable Crusher Plant" 应为 "Portable Crusher Plant" 2. "Crusher Vs Fixed Crushing Plant" 中的 "Vs" 应为 "vs" 3. "The 10 Best Ship Loader Manufacturers in The World" 中的 "The" 应小写为 "the" 4. "Stone Crusher in Ethiopia" 的下方第二个 "Stone Crusher In Ethiopia" 中的 "In" 应小写为 "in" 5. "CIP vs. CIL" 中的句点应去掉，改为 "CIP vs CIL" 6. "How to Choose the Best?" 中的问号可以去掉，改为 "How to Choose the Best" 7. "8 Types of Stone Crusher and How to Choose the Best?" 的数字 "8" 应为 "7" 8. "WhatsApp" 需要在前面添加一个撇号 '，变为 "WhatsApp" 9. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 中的右括号应为半角格式，改为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" 10. "To be Our Agent" 中的 "Our" 应小写为 "our" 11. "Operational Support" 中的 "Support" 不用大写，保持一致性 12. "EPCO Service" 的 "EPCO" 可能为 “EPC” 13. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" 之间需加个空格，改为 "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616" 14. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189" 的 "-" 应为半角格式，改为 "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189" 15. "Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us" 中的 "|" 应为 " | "，添加空格