【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact" should be corrected to "Impact" (the letter 'l' should be 'I'). 2. "other" should be capitalized to "Other" to maintain consistency in headings. 3. "中文" should have a consistent format with the other languages, perhaps to "Chinese" for clarity in the language selection context. The same applies to the other languages to keep them in English for user clarity. 4. "EPCO" may need clarification; if it's an acronym, it might require the full form or a consistent branding format. 5. "Mobile Demand" should be clarified for consistency with other headings, which are typically more descriptive. 6. There is an inconsistency in capitalizing the name of divisions within the business; "Services" should potentially be stylized consistently in relation to the other headings. 7. There is inconsistent spacing before some headings (such as "About" and "Hot Products"), which should be uniform across the document. Please review for consistency and clarity throughout the document. --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "are the benefits" should be "What are the benefits". 2. "the most popular mobile crusher on the market today, but what are the benefits of this device?" should end with a question mark instead of a period. 3. "the space of the crusher is not limited" could be clearer as "The space limitations of the crusher are non-existent". 4. "this type of equipment of mobile crusher has convenient installation advantages" should be "this type of mobile crusher equipment has convenient installation advantages". 5. "This is the advantage that other crushers can't match" should have "cannot" instead of "can't" for a more formal tone. 6. "it has become a new favorite in the industry, and is favored and recognized by consumers" should be "and has become favored and recognized by consumers". 7. "this type of equipment exhibits a high cost performance" should be "this type of equipment exhibits high cost performance" or "this type of equipment has a high cost-performance ratio". 8. "numerous benefits have made this type of device a place in the industry" should be "numerous benefits have made this type of device have a place in the industry". 9. "we must pay attention to the choice of brand and quality" should clarify "the choice of brands and qualities". 10. " " is not necessary and should be removed. Please note: There may be some stylistic suggestions, but I've focused on spelling, grammar, and punctuation issues. --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. “WhatsApp”出现了两次，建议统一。 2. “Materials (brochures, catalogs）”中的“）”应该改为英文括号“）”。 3. “Stone Crusher In Ethiopia”中的“In”应为小写“in”。 4. “Copyright © 2026”中的年份可能不正确，应确认是否为“2023”或其他年份。 5. “Get Price More”缺少标点符号，可以在后面加句点。