【第 1 段建议】: 发现的问题如下： 1. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" 中的 "lmpact" 应为 "Impact" (字母错误，i应为大写I)。 2. "High Weir Spiral Classifier" 处有多余的空格，应为 "High Weir Spiral Classifier"。 3. "Submerged Spiral Classifier" 处有多余的空格，应为 "Submerged Spiral Classifier"。 4. "Aggregate" 在 "Aggregates Belt Conveyor" 中单词形式应一致。这是一个名词短语，"Aggregates" 应保持一致。 5. "EPCO" 应为 "EPC"。如果是特定公司名，保持原样，否则应用一般表达形式。 请进行相应的修改。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "fety"应为"Safety" 2. "the value create"应为"the value created" 3. "the value created by a good Raymond mill It is worth paying attention to."应为"the value created by a good Raymond mill. It is worth paying attention to." 4. "the safety of the workers"建议改为"the safety of workers" 5. "Regular Raymond mill manufacturer"前应加定冠词"the" 6. "the bearing part"建议改为"the bearing" 7. "such as severe wear or breakage of the bearing"应为"such as severe wear or breakage of the bearings" 8. "that suits us when we purchase"建议改为"that suits us for purchase" 9. "Monster mill"前应加定冠词"a" 10. "a suitable machine will do more with less."应为"a suitable machine will do more with less." 11. "Vibratin"应为"Vibrating"