【第 1 段建议】: 1. "mill's" should be "mills'" for correct plural possessive form. 2. "Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher" should be "Vertical Shaft Impact Crusher" (the letter "l" is incorrect). 3. "SMP Crushing Plant" could potentially be clarified if it is not a recognized acronym; confirm if it's correct. 4. "Tool" should be re-evaluated if it is intended as a header; it is currently listed under "Product" with potential formatting issues. 5. "Aggregates Belt Conveyor" should have a lowercase "b" in "belt" to match the format of other items in the list. 6. "Wheeled Bulk Reception Feeder" should have a lowercase "w" in "wheeled" to maintain consistent formatting. 7. "Truck Unloader" should have a lowercase "u" in "unloader" to match the formatting style of other titles. 8. "Radial Telescopic Stacker" should have a lowercase "t" in "telescopic" for consistent formatting. 9. "Pipe Jacking Machine" should have a lowercase "j" in "jacking" for consistent formatting. 10. "Aggregates" listed under "Cases" can be questioned for duplication, as it also appears in "Business." Note: Make sure to follow consistent capitalization and formatting throughout all sections for clarity. --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "prod"应为"products"。 2. "There"应为"there"（小写）。 3. "production capacity"应为"production capacities"（复数形式）。 4. "analyzer"应为"analyzers"（复数形式）。 5. "analysis The machine"应为"analysis, the machine"（缺少逗号）。 6. "most of the powder can pass, so there is"应为"most of the powder can pass, so there are"（主谓不一致）。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "which may be caused by changes in the fineness of the finished product." - "which may be due to changes in the fineness of the finished product." (Word choice for clarity) 2. "Demand(multiple):" - "Demand (multiple):" (Spacing before parenthesis) 3. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" - "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" (Wrong punctuation: Chinese closing parenthesis should be replaced with English closing parenthesis) 4. "Service Support" - "Service support" (Inconsistent capitalization) 5. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" - "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616" (Spacing after colon) 6. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189 " - "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189" (Extra space after the number) 7. "Copyright © 2026" - "Copyright © 2023" (Year must reflect the correct date of publication) 8. "Tiktok" - "TikTok" (Correct capitalization) 9. "WhatsApp" - "WhatsApp" (Check if consistently formatted throughout the document) Please verify these corrections.