【第 1 段建议】: 1. "lmpact"应为"Impact" 2. "Сарится"应为"System" 3. "Wire"应为"Classifier" 4. "Belt"应为"Conveyor" --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. “the raymond mill” 应改为 “the Raymond mill” (首字母需大写) 2. “both of Raymond mill and ball mill equipment” 应改为 “both Raymond mill and ball mill equipment” (去掉“of”) 3. “the ball mill equipment” 应改为 “ball mill equipment” (去掉“the”) 4. “many steel balls of different specifications in the warehouse” 应改为 “many steel balls of different specifications in the warehouses” (复数形式需一致) 5. “the steel ball and a flat liner” 应改为 “steel balls and a flat liner” (保持复数一致性) 6. “to generate centrifugal force, the steel ball is driven to a certain height” 应改为 “to generate centrifugal force, the steel balls are driven to a certain height” (保持复数一致性) 7. “to select. ” 应改为 “to select.” (去掉多余的HTML实体) 这些问题涉及到拼写、单复数和标点的使用。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "WhatsApp" should be standardized to "WhatsApp" (although this is already correct) it appears multiple times which might be considered for consistency in capitalization. 2. “Demand(multiple):” should have a space between "Demand" and "(multiple):" → “Demand (multiple):” 3. “Materials (brochures, catalogs）” should replace the closing parenthesis with a proper one → “Materials (brochures, catalogs)” 4. In "Get Solution & Quotation," the general formatting for 'Get Solution Online Chat' could be uniform (either all uppercase or title case for consistency). 5. "SBM Blog" might be better represented with a colon after it for consistency with other headers. 6. "Legal Notice|Contact Us" should have spaces around the pipe symbol for consistency → "Legal Notice | Contact Us" 7. "EPCO Service" and "IoT Service" might benefit from consistent capitalization of "Service" if used elsewhere as "service." 8. “Copyright © 2026” should verify if the year is correct; ensure the content reflects the current year if applicable. Overall, the text would benefit from improved formatting for consistency in headings and attention to spacing.