【第 1 段建议】: 1. "Temperature Excessive"应改为"Excessive Temperature"。 2. "lmpact"中的字母“l”应为“I”，应改为"Impact"。 3. "Submerged Spiral Classifier"中的逗号应去掉，改为"Submerged Spiral Classifier"。 4. "High Weir Spiral Classifier"中的两个空格应改为一个，改为"High Weir Spiral Classifier"。 5. "Gyratory Crusher"和"Jaw Crusher"前的换行符需要去掉，以保持格式一致性。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "Temperature Excessive" should be "Temperature Excess". 2. "the Temperature Excessive" should be "the Excessive Temperature". 3. "the lubricating part regularly" should be "the lubricating parts regularly". 4. "the high temperature in the grinding room" should be "the high temperature of the grinding room". 5. "the ventilation of the grinding chamber can be adjusted properly, that is to open" should be "the ventilation of the grinding chamber can be adjusted properly; that is, to open". 6. "to prevent the high temperature of the mill room of the Raymond Mill. Necessary." should be "to prevent the high temperature of the mill room of the Raymond Mill is necessary." 7. "Latest Blog" and "Popular Blog" formatting should be consistent (e.g., consistently using either > or a bullet point). 8. "Mobile Crusher" and "Crusher" should be consistent in formatting (i.e., either "Mobile Crusher" and "Crusher" or "Mobile" and "Crusher" without separation). 9. "and after-sales se" is incomplete and should be "and after-sales service". --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. "Demand(multiple)" 应改为 "Demand (multiple)" (加空格) 2. "Materials (brochures, catalogs）" 应改为 "Materials (brochures, catalogs)" (将中文括号改为英文括号) 3. "WhatsApp:+86 13761974616" 应改为 "WhatsApp: +86 13761974616" (加空格) 4. "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189 0086-21-58386176" 应改为 "Sales Hotline: 0086-21-58386189, 0086-21-58386176" (添加逗号) 5. "Website Map|Legal Notice|Contact Us" 应改为 "Website Map | Legal Notice | Contact Us" (加空格) 6. "function(w,d,s,l,i){w[l]=w[l]||[];w[l].push({'gtm.start':" 应更正为 "function(w, d, s, l, i) {w[l] = w[l] || [];w[l].push({'gtm.start':" (加空格) 7. "for(var i=0;i-1){" 应改为 "for (var i = 0; i < tags.length; i++) {" (需要修正为有效的循环) 8. "tags[i].href=tags[i].href+c;}}" 应改为 "tags[i].href = tags[i].href + c;}}" (加空格) 请进行相应的更正。