【第 1 段建议】: 1. “Vertical Shaft lmpact Crusher” - “lmpact”应为“Impact”（字母'l'应为'I'）。 2. “High Weir Spiral Classifier” - 应将两个空格替换为一个空格。 3. “Submerged Spiral Classifier” - 应将两个空格替换为一个空格。 4. “Wheeled Bulk Reception Feeder” - 应为“Wheeled Bulk Reception Feeders”（复数形式）。 5. “Truck Unloader” - 应为“Truck Unloaders”（复数形式）。 6. “Radial Telescopic Stacker” - 应为“Radial Telescopic Stackers”（复数形式）。 7. “Ship Loader” - 应为“Ship Loaders”（复数形式）。 8. “EPCO” - 若指代服务，需确认为“EPC”或具体的命名（通常EPC为更常用的缩写）。 9. “Blog”后的格式应保持一致，建议小写且与其他菜单项一致。 其他部分检查无误。 --- 【第 2 段建议】: 1. "great role" → "a great role" 2. "high technolog" → "high technology" 3. "coal, barite, calcite, potassium feldspar, limestone, talc, marble, dolomite and gypsum etc." → "coal, barite, calcite, potassium feldspar, limestone, talc, marble, dolomite, gypsum, etc." 4. "whose Mok's hardness is not more than 9.3" → "whose Mohs hardness is not more than 9.3" 5. "The particle size of the products can be regulated within 40-400." → "The particle size of the products can be regulated within 40-400 microns." (specification for clarity) 6. "This series of ball mills are divided" → "This series of ball mills is divided" 7. "The screen-passing rate can reach to 99%" → "The screen-passing rate can reach 99%" 8. "the coal is to be routed to the sorter along the wind belt of the blower" → "the coal is routed to the sorter along the wind belt of the blower" 9. "the heat generated during grinding makes the moisture evaporated;" → "the heat generated during grinding makes the moisture evaporate;" 10. "the external air is sucked in and the circulation air mass increases." → "the external air is sucked in, and the circulation air mass increases." 11. "in The World" → "in the World" 这些是文本中的错误。 --- 【第 3 段建议】: 1. “Demand(multiple):” 应改为 “Demand (multiple):” （空格） 2. “Materials (brochures, catalogs）” 应改为 “Materials (brochures, catalogs)” （括号应为英文状态） 3. “ Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd.” 应改为 “Copyright © 2026 Shanghai Shibang Machinery Sales Co., Ltd.” （去除前面多余的空格）